Comments on: My Wakeup http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/ Thu, 29 Jul 2010 11:49:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: Kurai Tenshi http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/comment-page-1/#comment-500 Kurai Tenshi Tue, 23 Feb 2010 00:36:40 +0000 http://www.splintergeneration.com/?p=876#comment-500 All i can say is wow... You've got a great way of describing the scene i wish i could write like that. All i can say is wow… You’ve got a great way of describing the scene i wish i could write like that.

]]> By: Jessie Carty http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/comment-page-1/#comment-206 Jessie Carty Thu, 15 Oct 2009 19:39:57 +0000 http://www.splintergeneration.com/?p=876#comment-206 Wow! I have to agree with Kristan. I couldn't stop reading this one. Except maybe for the use of the word "junk." :) Wow! I have to agree with Kristan. I couldn’t stop reading this one. Except maybe for the use of the word “junk.” :)

]]> By: 10/15/09 @ In the Land of the Lotus Eaters http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/comment-page-1/#comment-203 10/15/09 @ In the Land of the Lotus Eaters Thu, 15 Oct 2009 17:35:39 +0000 http://www.splintergeneration.com/?p=876#comment-203 <em>Ed. note: We don't usually approve pingbacks, but we liked this one. </em> [...] My short story is up on Splinter Generation. An early review from a friend calls it “The Big Two-Hearted River of the Iraq Generation.”  I expect “sensational” and “spellbinding” to come soon.  In all seriousness, it’s been a good experience working with the editors at Splinter and I fully recommend submitting to them.  Thanks, guys.  And thanks to the folks who’ve already read it. [...] Ed. note: We don’t usually approve pingbacks, but we liked this one.

[...] My short story is up on Splinter Generation. An early review from a friend calls it “The Big Two-Hearted River of the Iraq Generation.”  I expect “sensational” and “spellbinding” to come soon.  In all seriousness, it’s been a good experience working with the editors at Splinter and I fully recommend submitting to them.  Thanks, guys.  And thanks to the folks who’ve already read it. [...]

]]> By: Jeff Wood http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/comment-page-1/#comment-202 Jeff Wood Thu, 15 Oct 2009 16:41:52 +0000 http://www.splintergeneration.com/?p=876#comment-202 What a good story. You tell more between the sentences than inside them. I like "I see are headlights and an empty horizon and I feel spiders fingering up my back." And "it’s flat and dry and it’s not home." And, hell, one more: "He leans in and there’s a sneer, a bounce, in him." That's my favorite, actually. Creepily accurate. I've seen that. Congrats. Nicely done. What a good story. You tell more between the sentences than inside them.

I like “I see are headlights and an empty horizon and I feel spiders fingering up my back.”

And “it’s flat and dry and it’s not home.”

And, hell, one more: “He leans in and there’s a sneer, a bounce, in him.” That’s my favorite, actually. Creepily accurate. I’ve seen that.

Congrats. Nicely done.

]]> By: Kristan http://www.splintergeneration.com/my-wakeup/comment-page-1/#comment-200 Kristan Wed, 14 Oct 2009 22:30:53 +0000 http://www.splintergeneration.com/?p=876#comment-200 An insanely readable story. I was halfway through it in what felt like seconds. It was also very visual, without getting mired in descriptions. The author did a great job immediately impressing a sense of setting and character upon us. Overall, I think this is top-notch work, and I congratulate the author. An insanely readable story. I was halfway through it in what felt like seconds. It was also very visual, without getting mired in descriptions. The author did a great job immediately impressing a sense of setting and character upon us. Overall, I think this is top-notch work, and I congratulate the author.

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